Lying in my bed I hear the clock tick, and I think of him. Reminiscing about all the times that we have shared- the good and the bad. The good will always overcome.
Sometimes he pictures me, I'm walking too far ahead. I have always and will always be there for him. He understands me, as I do him. There will never be anything that stands between us. If I'm lost he will look, and he will find me time after time. Neither of us are the same without each other. Even if I am two minutes away, he will still miss me. I am no one without him, and he is no one without me. I will never love another. If I fall he will catch me, and I will be waiting time after time. No matter where this life takes us, nothing will bring either of us down. Some things may knock me over, but he will never let me fall apart. Watching through windows, he's wondering if I'm okay. Always caring about how I feel, he comforts me on the worst of days. What would I do without him, and would he survive without me? He gives me reason to live, and I can't wait to build a future with him and our son.
This is a really good blog. I can relate to this in many ways. This is something personal and yet amazing. I really do enjoy this piece. Good Job Brianna =)
ReplyDeleteBrianna, you have an extremely beautiful and poetic way of writing. You have the ability to just put thoughts and emotions into words and onto paper, and it's wonderful. In this piece, I liked how everything was over one general subject, 'him', yet in each chunk you wrote a different thought. That makes it interesting to look at, and adds to the words you've written making it even more interesting to read.
ReplyDeleteThis was great, and I hope you continue writing poetically, since it seems to both be something you like and something you're good at!
Shannon - BCLUW